Wow. This reads like a professional writer's work. You build up tension really well. I hoped someone would take up the phone loophole, because I've wondered about it.
That conversation, his conflicting emotions and his problem with her forgiveness all ring very true. Well done indeed.
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Date: 2008-08-27 10:16 am (UTC)That conversation, his conflicting emotions and his problem with her forgiveness all ring very true. Well done indeed.
And I love your "Full Tardis" header, too!