kawaiispinel.livejournal.com ([identity profile] kawaiispinel.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] find_rightbrain 2008-05-18 11:00 pm (UTC)

I KNEW THIS WAS YOURS. Well, actually it was kinda obvious being as familiar as I am with your writing style and your Jack and Gwen voices (which I'll get to when I stop flailing) What's scary is I knew it by the title, actually.

ANYWAY, I loved this so much. I love the way you write Jack and Gwen and Jack/Gwen so much, because there's just this tension and subtle nuance between them that makes me giddy. I honestly never thought much of the ship until I started reading the way you write them and it just clicked, because it's so true to how they are, and this is just further proof of this.

And everything about the last few paragraphs is just so tense and wonderful and perfect and... Yes. Amazing.

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